Narrtive Writing

Haunted House

Once  there was a Older boy called John and a Young Girl called Daisy there Parents were gone to work The John was looking after daisy. At night John took daisy to bed. So daisy was fast asleep, John was asleep

Too, But Suddenly Daisy woke up because she heard some noise. She got up and she had her teddy bear with her

She walked down stairs and she saw her dad. Dad was drinking milk daisy ran down stairs and said “Daddy” And Dad turned around and it wasn't him it was a strange man she took daisy to the car and daisy got locked in the car. As Daisy was calling for John, John was still Sleeping. In The morning John went to Daisey room and siad “daisy get ready for school and daisy didn’et answer back because she was gone then mum & Dad came back. And Mum siad John is daisy gone to shcool and he siad no “Mum siad why”  John siad she can’t find Daisy...

My main characters

John ( Big Brother )

Daisy ( Young Girl)

Mum & Dad

Today I have been writing a narrative a Narrative means:

It is made up of a beginning a middle and end. In the beginning there is the orientation, in the middle there is a problem, and at the end we have the solution.