Remembering our summer hoilday

Photo by: Ingolfson Public domain

I heard the waves splashing on the hot sand.

I heard loud music beaming in my ears.

I saw people as pink as a flamingo.

I felt frightened because the massive rocks had a birds eye view of the blue harbour that laid beneath my feet.

I felt my heart beating as fast as a car.

I wondered if people might tumble onto the hard ground after falling off their bikes.

I wondered how long I would have to wait to get back to the safety of my home.

Today I have been writing a recount about remembering our summer holiday. My task was to make sentences without telling the reader what I did in the summer holiday. I had to finish the sentence, I heard, I saw, I felt, and I wondered. I learnt to put some powerful words in my story so that I can engage my reader.

Playing Midnight recount

Playing midnight

I felt happy when I first played the midnight game. I was full of energy and happiness. I wanted to cheat but we’re not allowed to, because we're supposed to be behind the line. I enjoyed playing the game by myself instead of with a partner. When I play with  a partner I would always lose because my partner would move. We can see other people doing different pose. If we keep moving Mr Ogilvie will tell us to do star jumps until he’s says STOP as Mr Ogilvie screams stop my ears was about to fall off.

This recount shows what I have been doing while Learning Space 2 were gone to camp. I made a recount of playing midnight with Learning Space 1