Two words One minute

Equipment and respect

This year for the winter olympics is held at the Pyeongchang which is at South Korea. Each sports have their own sports equipments. Some sports have equipments that are long, small or some thing that goes onto the floor. People from the winter olympics have to respect each other. They have to respect each other because they might be respectful back to you. Being respectful to others is important because respect makes people try hard. For this years theme for the 2018 Winter Olympics is called Passion Connected. In in winter olympics you can win Gold, Bronze or Silver medals. There are also Olympic values. They are called Friendship, Respect, and excellence.

Today we used the ‘2 words 1-minute’ challenge to write a description of the Winter Olympics.
After talking in pairs about the things we knew about the Winter Olympics we created a list
of words (vocabulary) that would help us write our description. We chose the words
‘equipment’ and ‘respect’ to help us think about what we were going to write.

We talked about ideas with a partner, then we had 1 minute to put those ideas
into sentences. We had to try our best to use all the words on our
vocab list. After the minute was up we had
2 minutes to reread what we had written and make changes if anything didn’t make
sense, or if we had words and punctuation in the wrong place. When we finished
checking we had 2 more minutes to carry on writing our descriptions.

All the words I highlighted were the words that was on my word list. 

I made sure that my full stops were in the right place.

I need to remember to make sure my sentence made sense