I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Ms Kirkpatrick and Mrs Anderson.
Thursday, 3 January 2019
Week 3 - Day 4 - Activity 1
Light is the only thing I know
Inevitable in this lonely world.
Get up from sorrow, search high.
Heaven knows you must not sigh.
Try to come up without loneliness inside.
In this Activity we had to write a acrostic poem about Light. Above this DLO is a acrostic poem that I wrote about light. This a bit challenging for me because I didnet know what acrostic poem goes with light
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Greetings Joshua,
ReplyDeleteWow the sentences you used for each letter from l - t was really good. That picture that you have chosen looks very beautiful because the light looks amazing! Do you like the image that you have chosen? Why?
Keep it up Joshua!
By Chavda
Hi Joshua,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing blog post from you. The image that is included looks nice. Did you enjoy doing this task, because I did. You have used strong and amazing words. I liked it how you said Inevitable in this lonely world.
NICE:)
Hello Joshua! Nice work, I really enjoyed your poem. I liked how you made it into a poem as well. You also used some beautiful words and descriptive words. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHey there Joshua, it's Billy here again from the Summer Learning Journey team.
ReplyDeleteWell done on writing this outstanding poem. You are so talented, I couldn't be more impressed with the range of vocabulary you have used. Do you often write poetry? What is your favourite type of poem to write?
Thanks Joshua, I'd love to hear more of your work.
Billy
Hi Joshua,
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing this activity. Your acrostic poem about light is great. My favorite line is get up from sorrow, search high. You did really well in writing this. Keep up the excellent work Joshua!