As the day comes by
Over 1.1 million people die
People Sneeze everywhere
Because of the unhealthy air
In China, there is a lot of air pollution
but someday they will find a solution
In this Acitivty we had to write a short poem about the Air Pollution in China, Begjing. I have decided to write 6 lines about the poem. Above this blurb is my short poem I created. I hope you Enjoy.
Greetings Joshua,
ReplyDeleteThat's great you have updated activities on your blog! I agree in China their air Pollution cancel their flights and they wewr masks that cover their mouth. What have you learnt in the summer learning journey?
Keep it up Joshua!
Hey Joshua
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem. I like the use of rhyming couplets (two lines that rhyme). You have used very descriptive language and it creates a sense of urgency for us to find a solution to the problem.
Keep up the great work.
Izzy
Greetings Joshua,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this task. I enjoyed doing this task. Did you enjoy doing this task? This task sure sounds amazing. I love the poem that you created. Good boy for adding a fact about pollution - Over 1.1 million people die.
NICE:)
Hello Joshua! Well done, you're poem tells a lot about the pollution there. I really like reading your short rhyming poem and the 6 lines you created for it. How do you think will be the solution? Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Joshua,
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing this Summer Learning Journey activity. Your poem about the smog in China is great. It's sad to here that over 1.1 million people die because of it. Keep up the excellent work Joshua.