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Thursday 30 July 2015

Revising sentences

Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in winch we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing.

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is called Oscar. Oscar is a tabby cat Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff around the rubbish bin. He always come to my house waiting for food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He Hates my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

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