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Friday 11 September 2015

Joshua's Argument Scaffold

    By Joshua

Should we let people in the forest?
Introduction
State what you are arguing about
State your opinion
For or Against
My argument  is about should we let people in the Forest. I am against having people in the forest  because they might get hurt and have accidents in the forest and the forest might not be safe.
Reason 1
Lost / Hurt
Supportive  details
Cell phones- no reception

Hyperthermia-very very cold

dehydrated-
very very hot
We should not let people in the forest because they might be hurt by bad people or they might get lots of  mosquitoes on them. Also people will be hurt by wild animals. And if people climb up the tree and they would fall down and bang on the ground. People should not leave rubbish around in the forest.
Reason 2
Lost

Supportive details


People can get lost and very cold. They can get very thirsty and need a water bottle.
Reason 3
Fire

Supportive details
Hot weather-dry



Fire can cause lots of damage  and matches can make lots of fire.If there is a fire on the grass and the wind blows it it  is made it bigger.If fire can get on tents it can be everywhere.
People can be hurt on burnt on the skin.
Conclusion


Therefore I think there should be no one in the forest because they could hurt. And the forest could get hurtt.

Today we were doing argument Scaffold and I had some Ideas and some reason

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